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Rhonda



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PostSubject: Losing Love   Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:52 pm

"Fire and Ice"

Our love once burned hot and bright.
Lost in passion from dusk to morning light.
A fiery glow seen for miles and miles.
Flushing faces with radiant smiles.

Kisses that egnited a white hot flame.
Soft murmurs and then crying out your name.
A scorching desire and longing again and again
Beads of sweat like molten lava on bare skin.

A cooling breeze now whispers in the wind.
Broken promises and a heart soon on the mend.
Chilling rain falls heavy drop by drop.
Streams of tears that will not stop.

Icy stares from once famliar loving eyes.
Cold ashes left as the last ember dies.
Memories and snow flakes fall day afer day.
A sweet spirit that has now all flown away.
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PostSubject: Re: Losing Love   Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:59 pm

nice...new one...I'm liking it...another good piece
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PostSubject: Re: Losing Love   Wed Sep 03, 2008 7:07 pm

wow...so your a writter too...really good Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up
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PostSubject: Re: Losing Love   Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:49 am

Sounds like several chapters from my life....lol. Very good! You know the best things come from personal experience....Keep up the good work!
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PostSubject: Re: Losing Love   Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:34 pm

ok thats the second comment like that I've seen just in this section Neutral
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PostSubject: Re: Losing Love   Tue Sep 09, 2008 5:20 am

Yes dear...is that a problem?
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PostSubject: Re: Losing Love   Fri Jan 13, 2012 12:28 am

Ah, I don't know.
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