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Rhonda



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PostSubject: Pain From Love   Wed Sep 03, 2008 11:33 am

"Winter Rain"

Lying alone tonight, holding you only in my dreams.
The truth is harder than it seems.
All my love I give in vain.
My broken heart bleeds cold as winter rain.

Dawn creeps in, the sun hiding in a cloudy sky.
Another day to live in this lie.
Unable to find escape from the pain.
You are my prison,bars of icy winter rain.

My pillow damp with desperate tears.
Winds of change blow gently in my ears.
I don't know how much longer I can stand this game.
Reality cuts me like whipping sheets of winter rain.

Your footsteps heavy on the bedroom floor.
Your face glares at me through the open door.
The suit case says it all, you don't have to explain.
You walk away,leaving me in bone chilling winter rain.

My breath leaves me, my body consumed by grief.
Deafened by pounding in my head, I pray to God for relief.
I scream for you, calling and calling your name.
My only answer, never ending drops of winter rain.

The sun refuses to shine, my life in a state of decay.
My eyes are opened when I hear the voice of the Lord say,
"I am beside you my child, you ask for me and I came."
"Come with me and I will walk with you out of this winter rain."
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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Wed Sep 03, 2008 11:58 am

really nice.... Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:11 pm

three for the new person

:toast: :toast: :toast:

you and Beatle are both writing...this section is now starting to liven up a bit

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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:37 pm

blushing..... then bowing...... thank you
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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Wed Sep 03, 2008 5:41 pm

:toast: yea...hope to see you write some more and I'll try to keep it up with my new ones and we'll have a very active section....great work
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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:55 am

Wow...another chapter from my recent life...lol. Thanks ....it's very good and I like the hope of Christ at the end....great work!
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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:31 pm

brknangel wrote:
another chapter from my recent life
what was that supposed to mean
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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Tue Sep 09, 2008 5:22 am

Well baby...you should know as well as anyone that I have been through these same experiences...over and over. I guess I can just relate to her work. Ok?
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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Fri Sep 26, 2008 12:47 am

you relate to her work as she relates to my work....is big circle
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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Thu Nov 20, 2008 6:25 am

Very true.......good insight:!:
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PostSubject: Re: Pain From Love   Fri Jan 13, 2012 12:12 am

Of course. Rolling Eyes
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