The ones I've written so far

1.Into Black

They like to think they own me
They think they control everything
I watch as the young generation
Falls into black
Thinking there's no options
They're all falling..into black
But I can still see the light
I will no longer be in their sights
Into black

2.Imagine

Imagine yourself lost and affraid
Wishing you could be saved
Imagine yourself confused and alone
And you ask...but get help from no one
Imagine yourself so helpless
Everything so far and timeless
Imagine yourself locked in your room
Unable for your heart to bloom
Imagine if you knew
That I will help you
I can help you get through
The confusion..the fear..and the lonliness
No one else will help you..just me
Imagine what it's like to be free
Imagine

3.Falling Away

I'm falling away again
I'm becoming one of them
I never thought I'd fall so confused
My whole life has been consumed
Everything I've seen
In the depth of my darkest dreams
I'm falling away
I don't know what to say
My life is going down
I'll never come around
I will never heal
I'm confused in what is real
I'm falling away
In the darkest day
My life is gone
Everything I've worked for is done
Never going to see
Why it all happened to me
I'm falling away
Things are not going to be ok
I'm lost in my pain
My life was just as long as rain
Never going to see
If I could be
One to do
What I need to
Now I can only say
I'm falling away

4.Revolution

There are so many thing going on
They like to think that they've won
And now our world is gone
We need a revolution
Anyone who will stand with me
To take back what's ours
Come stand with me on the frontline
And we'll let those who are against us see
That we've had enough
And we're about to rise up
This is a revolution
We'll fight till we've won
Never give up till it's done
Never stop fighting for what we stand for
Fight till we can't no more
We have fought a revolution
And did what we done
Won back the world
Showed that we could do anything
During the revolution

5.All My Life

All my life,I've heard these things
The things that are going on
All the things that are happening
There's no use in being the one
The one who has to do
Has to do what needs to be done
All my life...I've tried to hide
Hide away from the world
I have no place to reside
All my life I've tried to run
Run away from the world
Cause I don't want to be the one
All my life
There's no right
No right here anymore
I feel so sore
And so insecure
All my life I thought
Thought I could escape
All my life I locked
Locked my doors behind me
All my life
There's no right
No right anywhere
All they do is stop and stare
Nobody will help you
All they will do...is nothing
All my life I screamed
Screamed but no one heard me
My life had always seemed
Seemed to be ignored
As a nation
Simply waits for something
When they wait
For nothing...
All my life
All I can do is fight
Just just feel like nothing by night

6.My Hard Life

Just like before
I know a little bit more
All around there's ignorance
Nothing ever makes any sence
I can not take this,the world is so immature
All they want is more and more and more
Forgoten memories
Then forget the possibilities
I never get a chance
Not even a passing glance
When I think I'm home
I'm just alone
I'm feeling so faithless
When I look into your face
I'm falling into nothing
Screw that..I want to see something
My hard life..will never pass over
Someone tell these people I'll never
Never give in to their evil way
Never give up in these strange days
Now make them shut-up and listen to what I have to say
I won't be ingored
For what I did before
I can't feel
The way I did before
When they just want more
They are hypocrites
I will never forget
What they've done
It affects us all
I'm dizzy from the ups and downs
Sick of all the world around
With nuclear weapons
All the car bombs
And the terrorist
All around me there's
Gang fights
Murder
Hatred
Theives
Hypocrites
And the people stealing my rights
My hard life

7.World Around

Nobody ever thinks I'm right
No one is on my side
All they ever want to do is fight
Leaving me to do nothing..but hide
So I...I don't want to feel
Don't want to heal
With this world around
They'll just break me down,again
I don't want to know
Know what is happening,in this world around
I hear that some things
Will never be the way they were before
I don't want this anymore
I don't want to stay here
While the world around me breaks
I don't want to see
What's happening in the world around me
I just want to be free
Free from all these things
And all I want
Is to leave
This world around
I don't want to learn
Learn anymore of what is happening
I'm so tired of this
The world around has become so ignorant
All the hours of the day
I hide myself
Now I come out to say
That I've hade enough
Enough of the world around
And the way they try to bring me down
But I'm back now,and makin' new sounds
The world around
Is becoming nothing
I'll be there to see
When the hypocrites change their ways
The world around

8.New Found Freedom

In this world as it goes down
All I see when I look around
Are lyers
And fakers
Seems there's no hope
And finally I will say I've had enough
New found freedom for me
Wish you could see
All that's happening
Around you there's nothing
To look back up to
All I ever wanted you to do
Was understand
What's at hand
And to know
The world is so low
Wish you could have seen
That you could've been
Free from depresion
Free from oppression
Free from pain
Free from the insane
I did all I've done
New found freedom

and that was all...I'm always working on more though

I love these baby...absolutely! Thanks for posting them here for me!

:P

OOps...how did I do that?? I'm confused..lol..

Ok...so got any new ones in the works? If so, I'd start a new thread for each new one. That would be cool, then I and others can comment on each one. That was ok though to post all these in a group. Good job.

I might

I don't see your latest one here...start a thread with that one in it....K?

ok...I'll try to get it here

Also anything new lately? You're not having writer's block are you?

brknangel wrote:Also anything new lately? You're not having writer's block are you?

uhh...what

I see you have two other new ones too...a thread for each one please so we can critique them...thanks

yea....I would like it better if I weren't the only one writting....

Is that a hint that I should submit something?

brknangel wrote:Is that a hint that I should submit something?

yes it is
oh and I'll go fix your posting problem up there
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