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Kitty_Smiles on Fri Mar 20, 2009 2:55 am
my life was complete till you showed up
then i realized what i had been missing
a whole part of my heart
then you ripped it out
tore it shredds with your awful words
throwing what happiness i had to the side
never once caring what damage was left behind
i was left to pick up the pieces
scattered all around
but one day they wil be back in place
instead another face will fill that hole
and fix what you left behind
but there will always be a little scar
never straying from its place
this is a poem i wrote, its about love lost i guess. I hope you like it.
then i realized what i had been missing
a whole part of my heart
then you ripped it out
tore it shredds with your awful words
throwing what happiness i had to the side
never once caring what damage was left behind
i was left to pick up the pieces
scattered all around
but one day they wil be back in place
instead another face will fill that hole
and fix what you left behind
but there will always be a little scar
never straying from its place
this is a poem i wrote, its about love lost i guess. I hope you like it.
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Re: poem....
Guitarist121 on Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:12 pm
hey...this poem is awesome..nice work, 
glad to see you are starting to post them
glad to see you are starting to post them
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brknangel on Sat Apr 04, 2009 2:31 pm
Very nice honey....sorry you're already experiencing heartache in your young life....but we're not immune to that this side of heaven. Write more...you're good! Thanks for sharing...
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LinkinParkRokr on Sun Apr 05, 2009 6:19 am
hey..very nice.. 
like I always say,with more artistic people,the world itself could be better
like I always say,with more artistic people,the world itself could be better
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Guitarist121 on Sat May 02, 2009 6:03 pm
lol..we have our very own philosopher.. 
I could quote rokr..and maybe every so often quote Palibus
I could quote rokr..and maybe every so often quote Palibus
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brknangel on Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:30 pm
Rokr is a philosopher? Wow!
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LinkinParkRokr on Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:26 pm
yes I might...and to bring back to note..this poem is legit
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Guitarist121 on Sat Sep 19, 2009 7:35 pm
legit...hmm,new word here;
we can start using this,good one man
we can start using this,good one man
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