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my new one...also called 'Change Me'

Post  Guitarist121 on Sat May 02, 2009 6:26 pm

I found time..and decided to write..

Change Me

Here I am
Alone I stand
A small pawn
Waiting for light of dawn
Caught In lies and distrust
These days now are break or bust
Political outrages and worldly unrest
I have just one request
Just change me
Forget me
Release me
So I can see
The world today
What can I say
...

ok..and I need to work on it more

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Re: my new one...also called 'Change Me'

Post  LinkinParkRokr on Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:09 am

YES Exclamation

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Re: my new one...also called 'Change Me'

Post  brknangel on Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:22 pm

Nice baby...glad to see you're writing again...Cool

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Re: my new one...also called 'Change Me'

Post  brknangel on Thu Oct 15, 2009 5:04 pm

Yeah ..just reread this one...it's good!

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