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PostSubject: Mirror   Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:40 am

Mirror

What can I do
To prove to you
That Iím not a fool
I could be cool
But at this cost
I canít forsake
For what I want most
But give into my fate

Everyday I passed you by
As I wondered, who am I
As the day around me is ending
As I lie here so undeserving
As I try to portray
This role I had played
As time passes me on
And I wait for dawn

I look at this world of mine
I take all I have to take
I may seem to b e in line
But so fake

Bring me back
From this hole
Show me what I lack
When I look deep into my soul
And as I face my fears
For all these years
And when I fall
I will take it all


I will now take all the colorfull comments and such
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PostSubject: Re: Mirror   Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:54 pm

OK...nice....deep....but...
interpretation please...it's one of those that worries me...
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PostSubject: Re: Mirror   Wed Sep 30, 2009 5:20 pm

Rolling Eyes quite a colorful comment brkn..it means nothing
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PostSubject: Re: Mirror   Thu Oct 15, 2009 5:53 am

Sounds sad...despair...

but...that shouldn't be...you're a born again believer in Christ...so
why do you write this sad stuff? Just asking....
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PostSubject: Re: Mirror   Fri Jan 13, 2012 12:03 am

I don't know, it's just how my creative writing takes it's best shape.
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