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PostSubject: poem....   Thu Mar 19, 2009 3:55 pm

my life was complete till you showed up
then i realized what i had been missing
a whole part of my heart
then you ripped it out
tore it shredds with your awful words
throwing what happiness i had to the side
never once caring what damage was left behind
i was left to pick up the pieces
scattered all around
but one day they wil be back in place
instead another face will fill that hole
and fix what you left behind
but there will always be a little scar
never straying from its place

this is a poem i wrote, its about love lost i guess. I hope you like it.
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PostSubject: Re: poem....   Fri Mar 27, 2009 2:12 am

hey...this poem is awesome..nice work, Thumbs Up
glad to see you are starting to post them
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PostSubject: Re: poem....   Sat Apr 04, 2009 3:31 am

Very nice honey....sorry you're already experiencing heartache in your young life....but we're not immune to that this side of heaven. Write more...you're good! Thanks for sharing...:D
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PostSubject: Re: poem....   Sat Apr 04, 2009 7:19 pm

hey..very nice.. Cool
like I always say,with more artistic people,the world itself could be better Artistic

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PostSubject: Re: poem....   Sat May 02, 2009 7:03 am

lol..we have our very own philosopher.. Naughty
I could quote rokr..and maybe every so often quote Palibus
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PostSubject: Re: poem....   Fri Jun 26, 2009 5:30 am

Rokr is a philosopher? Wow!
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PostSubject: Re: poem....   Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:42 am

he does have some stuff<<<|
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PostSubject: Re: poem....   Tue Sep 08, 2009 8:26 am

yes I might...and to bring back to note..this poem is legit

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PostSubject: Re: poem....   Sat Sep 19, 2009 8:35 am

legit...hmm,new word here;
we can start using this,good one man Arrow
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