http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/-t1.htm Have a song or poem you've written...post them here Tue, 08 Sep 2009 11:40:53 GMT 10 http://i85.servimg.com/u/f85/11/65/84/05/guitar11.jpg http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/-t1.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/divided-t181.htm Guitarist121 haven't written in a while..so here it goes. Divided In the hour of my time I'm always out of line I can't control what you create But I'm the one you love to hate I've believed you lies for so long That I didn't know what was right or wrong I don't know who to trust anymore So unsure I lock my door And never leave again To all the things I said I'm divided Between what I thought I knew And what I have to do To work this through I can't hide What's Inside And ... Writers Place Sun, 09 Aug 2009 03:40:59 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/divided-t181.htm#2767 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/divided-t181.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/since-you-guys-had-wanted-to-see-this-t148.htm LinkinParkRokr this is something..that i uhh..wrote for my girlfriend about a year ago when i met her,and i'm kinda nervous posting here cause i haven't ever really considered myself a great writter,so here it goes when i look you know they always say there's a perfect someone there for you i spent many days looking for the true and now i really know that i've found something here i've got the most the most perfect far and near and now when i look into your eyes time passes ... Writers Place Sun, 14 Sep 2008 08:29:05 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/since-you-guys-had-wanted-to-see-this-t148.htm#2043 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/since-you-guys-had-wanted-to-see-this-t148.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/the-ones-i-ve-written-so-far-t32.htm Guitarist121 1.Into Black They like to think they own me They think they control everything I watch as the young generation Falls into black Thinking there's no options They're all falling..into black But I can still see the light I will no longer be in their sights Into black 2.Imagine Imagine yourself lost and affraid Wishing you could be saved Imagine yourself confused and alone And you ask...but get help from no one Imagine yourself so helpless Everything so far ... Writers Place Sun, 16 Sep 2007 03:51:03 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/the-ones-i-ve-written-so-far-t32.htm#55 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/the-ones-i-ve-written-so-far-t32.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/my-new-onealso-called-change-me-t175.htm Guitarist121 I found time..and decided to write.. Change Me Here I am Alone I stand A small pawn Waiting for light of dawn Caught In lies and distrust These days now are break or bust Political outrages and worldly unrest I have just one request Just change me Forget me Release me So I can see The world today What can I say ... ok..and I need to work on it more Writers Place Sat, 02 May 2009 11:26:25 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/my-new-onealso-called-change-me-t175.htm#2671 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/my-new-onealso-called-change-me-t175.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/a-second-attempt-t163.htm LinkinParkRokr heres my second time writting living a life another day passes and you do know why drowning in though seems to make me wonder why how your life will grow and this is why everything i treasure most can not be taken away life on the coast cannot be any harder cant you hear,she is calling for you can you hear her though you knew you cant see what lies ahead a lonely life but dont give up you see i i will help you get back the way you want it to this ... Writers Place Fri, 23 Jan 2009 01:21:42 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/a-second-attempt-t163.htm#2537 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/a-second-attempt-t163.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/fade-t165.htm Guitarist121 Fade Look back at what I've done And I'm not sure Cause where I come from None of it matters >And when life >Fades away >You can try >Just think about yesterday >Forget all these things >As they go by >And when nobody is listening >Just ask why You know what they say You can't change your ways Now it seems to me I can't be free > > > > I will be trying to post this one to youtube...note/ the >'s mark ... Writers Place Thu, 19 Feb 2009 22:13:04 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/fade-t165.htm#2611 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/fade-t165.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/believe-t176.htm Guitarist121
Believe

Here I am face to face
With my own disgrace
Fighting to see another day
Fighting for my life
Could I survive
When I believe
Living relief
Could I be free
You know
I believe in you
Now can I trust in you
I believe]]> Writers Place Tue, 02 Jun 2009 23:11:02 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/believe-t176.htm#2674 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/believe-t176.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/mirror-t183.htm Guitarist121 Mirror What can I do To prove to you That I’m not a fool I could be cool But at this cost I can’t forsake For what I want most But give into my fate Everyday I passed you by As I wondered, who am I As the day around me is ending As I lie here so undeserving As I try to portray This role I had played As time passes me on And I wait for dawn I look at this world of mine I take all I have to take I may seem to b e in line But so fake Bring me ... Writers Place Tue, 08 Sep 2009 11:40:53 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/mirror-t183.htm#2795 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/mirror-t183.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/outcast-t160.htm Guitarist121 Outcast

Sometimes I feel like
I don't belong anymore
All that I know
All that I am
I'm an outcast
Now it's time
To let go
Cause I can't take this pain anymore
Giving up to everything of this world
So sick of the times
And I
I'd give this all away
Just to be me again
Go Back to yesterday
So I can try again]]> Writers Place Sat, 06 Dec 2008 02:01:23 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/outcast-t160.htm#2498 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/outcast-t160.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/one-lost-road-t174.htm Guitarist121 this one is technically pretty old...but its the last I wrote...note>sorry for not writting much..but I'm busy recording..I'll write again soon. One Lost Road When did I lose my pride How did I fall so far behind When did I lose my direction Now my path is broken When I fear a loss And let myself down I'm here because On the ground I've let myself fall again For what is known Where could I begin Find my one lost road Why is this pain so hard to pass Why ... Writers Place Sat, 02 May 2009 10:46:36 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/one-lost-road-t174.htm#2669 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/one-lost-road-t174.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/poem-t169.htm Kitty_Smiles my life was complete till you showed up then i realized what i had been missing a whole part of my heart then you ripped it out tore it shredds with your awful words throwing what happiness i had to the side never once caring what damage was left behind i was left to pick up the pieces scattered all around but one day they wil be back in place instead another face will fill that hole and fix what you left behind but there will always be a little scar never straying ... Writers Place Thu, 19 Mar 2009 19:55:28 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/poem-t169.htm#2624 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/poem-t169.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/my-dark-side-two-poems-t130.htm Rhonda "Diary Of Suicide" My aching heart is the reflection of the unrest in my soul. Aimless wondering through the mazes of life takes it toll. Unable to keep my grasp on reality,confusion floods my brain. Sanity slowly looses it grip,releasing me to the insane. The silence screams in my ears and crowds my mind. Unrelenting darkness covers the pathways I need to find. Weariness plagues my body,peaceful slumber turns to unrest. Hours crawl by,haunting nightmares ... Writers Place Thu, 04 Sep 2008 13:50:32 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/my-dark-side-two-poems-t130.htm#1800 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/my-dark-side-two-poems-t130.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/here-are-two-more-t158.htm Guitarist121 this song here I wrote..is actually meant to be played by a SG but apperently it sucks to say I don't have one yet Recieve Stand up and Be counted Because you are about to recieve What you say What you do Is what you believe Who Knew that You'd be so good At the game of decieve Crawl back up Fall in line Have you had enough Quit your stallin watch out You're fallin Again Down right with you And maybe now You will trust a jew Cought ... Writers Place Thu, 23 Oct 2008 08:09:21 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/here-are-two-more-t158.htm#2370 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/here-are-two-more-t158.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/fall-far-9-11-wtc-tribute-t145.htm Guitarist121 Fall Far (9/11 Tribute) Clear day Unsuspecting And we say Breath taking Black Skies Fills the air Peoples cries And we stare Don't want to give in to you You know I'd never Know what to do Hope flies on As many,fall far Keep on trying As a building Just callapses Praying nation Watches in horror Of their family Taking the leap I don't expect much of you You had some problems And you just gave in And you just fall real far ... Writers Place Sat, 13 Sep 2008 06:11:34 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/fall-far-9-11-wtc-tribute-t145.htm#1986 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/fall-far-9-11-wtc-tribute-t145.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/pain-from-love-t125.htm Rhonda "Winter Rain" Lying alone tonight, holding you only in my dreams. The truth is harder than it seems. All my love I give in vain. My broken heart bleeds cold as winter rain. Dawn creeps in, the sun hiding in a cloudy sky. Another day to live in this lie. Unable to find escape from the pain. You are my prison,bars of icy winter rain. My pillow damp with desperate tears. Winds of change blow gently in my ears. I don't know how much longer I can stand ... Writers Place Wed, 03 Sep 2008 15:33:54 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/pain-from-love-t125.htm#1722 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/pain-from-love-t125.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/ode-to-you-from-me-t155.htm brknangel Ode to You....from Me You came blaring into my life One cold winter's night I didn't want to let you in Lonely, cute, and sweet But you were much too young For this time weathered battered heart Still you persisted At times even insisted That you and I were meant to be I politely said no thanks And you quietly went away Then in a weak moment I let my guard down And gave you access to my heart You seized that moment And marched right in Listened to my ... Writers Place Sun, 21 Sep 2008 00:52:46 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/ode-to-you-from-me-t155.htm#2173 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/ode-to-you-from-me-t155.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/musician-s-life-t143.htm Rhonda "Living Life To The Fullest" I get another cigarette, and pick up this pen again. The words come so fast it makes my head spin. My body feels the strain of the miles I've put behind. But my mind keeps moving on to what I have to find. The roads are getting longer,and my soul is growing weary. The distance I've put between me and you has my eyes teary. (chorus) I'm just living life to the fullest,chasing all my dreams. Don't give up on me Baby,no matter ... Writers Place Sat, 06 Sep 2008 23:54:07 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/musician-s-life-t143.htm#1865 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/musician-s-life-t143.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/healing-t124.htm Rhonda " FREEDOM OF THE HEART" (Drew's song) You walked into my life one day, a familiar face from the past. Your ways were wise, even in your youth, you helped me find the truth. My heart was in a prison, filled with pain and fear and tragedy. You wrapped your arms around me,and held me through the night. You touched my face in the morning light, you kissed away my tears. CHORUS I didn't understand it, the feelings that were there. But the healing had to start ... Writers Place Wed, 03 Sep 2008 14:55:00 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/healing-t124.htm#1721 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/healing-t124.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/give-peace-a-chance-t105.htm Guitarist121 I actually just read an e-mail and decided to write about it Give Peace A Chance- It seems everyone around Is either very lonely or very cold But what do you expect in this time of war When it's dangerous just to go next door Why can't we just stop fighting And just give peace a chance I walk down the street..I look back And take a second glance And all I see is chaos Why can we just give peace a chance I know the wars of the world will never stop But why can't we ... Writers Place Sat, 02 Feb 2008 16:16:51 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/give-peace-a-chance-t105.htm#1069 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/give-peace-a-chance-t105.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/image-t81.htm Guitarist121 -Image- There's something that lives inside me An image that I want to just erase I don't think anyone cares About what hides beneath the surface I want to heal Everything that's real And I want to feel What's it's like to be free I want out of confusion Want to come to a conclusion This image inside I can't hide In the back of my mind I don't want to be the one who has to lose I don't want to be confused I try to go somewhere else But the image always finds ... Writers Place Sun, 14 Oct 2007 04:17:35 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/image-t81.htm#513 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/image-t81.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/looking-back-t122.htm Guitarist121 this is the first actual..major piece of work for..Him enjoy it This is the first day Of the rest of my life Walking down a long path Looking back on the road that led me to you And I'm finally alive And I'm never going back again Taking back what is mine Forgotten lies I will never miss Letting go of this And come running Running back to you Cause I know What you've promised me And I know I can't live without you On ... Writers Place Tue, 02 Sep 2008 20:13:04 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/looking-back-t122.htm#1707 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/looking-back-t122.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/one-thread-and-several-songs-t142.htm Guitarist121 A Dark Funnel Cloud (tribute to the town of Greensburg which was hit by an f5 tornado last year) Water falls...before you Grey skies Strecting far across the world Swirling darkness And a town...makes a cry As a nation steps aside And then they're gone Do you see the men are out today Just sit and stare their life away As a town lies in the way Of one of the most destructive Thing you could imagine And the people..were here right then Disappear into a dark ... Writers Place Sat, 06 Sep 2008 19:39:27 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/one-thread-and-several-songs-t142.htm#1862 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/one-thread-and-several-songs-t142.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/tribute-to-my-king-t149.htm brknangel TRIBUTE TO MY KING..... I thought it only appropriate to dedicate my first submission to my God and King This is for my one true love, my Jesus.... Creator, Master, Savior, King God of wonder, Lord of everything Precious spirit full of wondrous grace How I long to see your face.... Awe inspiring, Eternal Majesty Your amazing grace overwhelms me Breath of life, Creator of all Yet there to catch me when I fall... Air that I breathe, my soul's desire Your warmth embraces ... Writers Place Mon, 15 Sep 2008 12:09:13 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/tribute-to-my-king-t149.htm#2052 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/tribute-to-my-king-t149.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/about-love-t141.htm Rhonda [color=cyan]"Once Upon A Dream" One morning I awoke and beside me lay a dream to my surprise. I fell in love, staring into your captivating brown eyes. You took away my loneliness,and stood with me against the world outside. You understood my pain, in your arms I ran away to hide. We chased our dreams, and left the sorrows far behind. Threw caution to the wind not knowing what we would find. Side by side,guided with our lives eternally entwined. Sharing secret ... Writers Place Fri, 05 Sep 2008 21:53:53 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/about-love-t141.htm#1858 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/about-love-t141.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/lessons-in-love-t131.htm Rhonda "THE DANGER IN LOVING TOO MUCH" KEEP YOUR HEART SAFE, DON'T LET ANYONE TOO NEAR. THE DANGER IN LOVING TOO MUCH, IS WHAT YOU HAVE TO FEAR. THE DISTANCE YOU CHOOSE TO KEEP OR GO, WILL DETERMINE YOUR FATE. DON'T LET YOUR HEART'S BARRIERS DOWN, THEN IT WILL BE TOO LATE. GIVE ONLY A SMALL PART OF YOURSELF. BE CAREFUL, DON'T TAKE THE DARES. LISTEN TO YOUR HEAD, DON'T LOOK IN HIS EYES. KEEP AWAY FROM HIS STARES. CHORUS BEWARE OF THE DANGER IN LOVING ... Writers Place Thu, 04 Sep 2008 14:09:16 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/lessons-in-love-t131.htm#1801 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/lessons-in-love-t131.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/losing-love-t128.htm Rhonda "Fire and Ice" Our love once burned hot and bright. Lost in passion from dusk to morning light. A fiery glow seen for miles and miles. Flushing faces with radiant smiles. Kisses that egnited a white hot flame. Soft murmurs and then crying out your name. A scorching desire and longing again and again Beads of sweat like molten lava on bare skin. A cooling breeze now whispers in the wind. Broken promises and a heart soon on the mend. Chilling rain ... Writers Place Wed, 03 Sep 2008 21:52:27 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/losing-love-t128.htm#1746 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/losing-love-t128.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/being-a-woman-t139.htm Rhonda "The Greatest Gift" We walk in this world with our heads held high. Scars left on our souls,from generations gone by. Created from the rib bone of God's first man. Our destiny navigated with what Eve began. Chastised and kept prisoner,our only worth as slaves. Battered and beaten, sent to early graves. Treated as property to be sold and traded. Our daughters slaughtered,their lives under rated. Kings made us their Queens,poor men made us their wives. Outside ... Writers Place Fri, 05 Sep 2008 19:37:48 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/being-a-woman-t139.htm#1854 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/being-a-woman-t139.htm http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/a-love-to-remember-t144.htm Rhonda "Remember Me" As I wave good bye to this chapter of my life tonight. I die inside as you walk away,and wonder if what you said is right. Your voice still echoes numbness through my heart, As I am searching for a new start. I know the life I had,before you walked in my door that day. But in this time I have spent with you, I've lost myself along the way. Remember me in a prayer,close your eyes and I will be there. See me on a starry night,when the moon is ... Writers Place Sun, 07 Sep 2008 00:33:09 GMT http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/a-love-to-remember-t144.htm#1866 http://rocktalk.forumotion.com/writers-place-f7/a-love-to-remember-t144.htm